Fan Fiction - Foward Unto Destiny
by TTL Demag0gue 
, Within the shadow of the Traveler, Saturday, March 30, 2013, 18:21 (4036 days ago)
My turn to contribute a bit of fan fiction to the pot.
I've had the idea in my head for a couple of days now, but Bungie's GDC presentation gave me a little extra fodder. It's a bit shorter than I'd originally planned for - I decided to leave a couple things on the cutting room floor for this installment - but I hope it's an enjoyable read nonetheless.
I welcome any and all feedback.
Fan Fiction - Foward Unto Destiny
by Mr Daax , aka: SSG Daax, Saturday, March 30, 2013, 20:36 (4036 days ago) @ TTL Demag0gue
I am in no way an expert on writing; I just enjoy reading, and try to remember everything that I learned in English/Grammar class. Brief as this was, I really loved it. Very well written, and easy to get into. As a reader, this is a story that grabbed my attention quickly. If it were longer, I would want to continue reading it.