Urk got hot!

http://www.indiegogo.com/projects/celistic-brascot-6

[I'm not saying this is a rip-off, but the opening in particular has quite a few clear influences]

Urk got hot!

http://www.indiegogo.com/projects/celistic-brascot-6

[I'm not saying this is a rip-off, but the opening in particular has quite a few clear influences]

I cringed.

Urk got hot!

http://www.indiegogo.com/projects/celistic-brascot-6

[I'm not saying this is a rip-off, but the opening in particular has quite a few clear influences]

Feels more like a Halo ripoff than a Destiny ripoff. (Sorry... inspired by.)

I love that the 'journalist' needs to appear in high heels and a bikini.

I love that the 'journalist' needs to appear in high heels and a bikini.

Heh, my first thought was, "She's a journalist. Riiiiiiight."

why?!

I mean, with the shuttles and the armor and the coveralls that one guy is wearing...

If, ah, if this was presented to me as concepts for the next Mass Effect game, I wouldn't blink an eye.

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List of mistakes:

• Getting someone external to the team to talk about the game - doesn't build that personal relationship
  
• Dressing them up in a bikini, with heels, and heavy makeup, on the veranda of a beach house - doesn't make it look like you need money
  
• No past projects that are anything like a video game - no info on lead programmer in particular
  
• Name dropping big games without explaining how they inspired the project
  
• Awkward grammar in the descriptions
  
• Super generic hero

Did I miss anything?