Type: Hand Cannon

Description: In the waste of the old world, one city still stands, the last human stronghold. When the FOTC was formed to arm and ration our compatriots, there was hope in our citizens and fear in our enemies. The Vanguards delivered fear by the round to our vagrant guests with truth, justice, and .... The Law of the Land.

The land has been here longer than their occupation, longer than our occupation, and it's law still stands fast and true. And no one, not our Guardians, not the Fallen, not God himself can break the bounds that hold it together, without justice being rightly delivered.

One crime, one sentence, one shot, one kill. It's been years since they took from us what was ours. The law has gone ignored for far too long. There are many perps, and a lot of justice needs delivered. Judge those who have wronged our kind, in your hand you hold the Law.

Powers:

-multiple ammo types: incendiary, armor piercing, shock
-powerful one shot weapon, long reload
-The longer one achieves aggro (being seen/engaged), the more powerful it becomes.
-delivers justice at high speeds, convicts the guilty.

-The longer one achieves aggro (being seen/engaged), the more powerful it becomes.
-delivers justice at high speeds, convicts the guilty.

I like these two qualities particularly. :)

Yeah I apologize I haven't done a good job responding to these when you post them, but I do enjoy them a lot. I may post one soon too if I can find the time to write it!

9.9/10
I like it a lot, but I would change the last line slightly

Judge those who have wronged our kind, for in your hand you hold the Law.

(plus some spelling issues but whatever) and this was almost calling out for "destiny" to be used (Deliver the Wrongdoers unto their Destiny or something) but it's nowhere to be seen.

-multiple ammo types: incendiary, armor piercing, shock

I'm curious what "shock" ammo does.

(plus some spelling issues but whatever) and this was almost calling out for "destiny" to be used (Deliver the Wrongdoers unto their Destiny or something) but it's nowhere to be seen.

So I totally would've done that if I wasn't going for a theme. This one was based off the Lawgiver, the gun of Judge Dredd.

I'm curious what "shock" ammo does.

It shocks you.

With its flamboyancy. After all, this gun is officially: