DBO Drawing Board: Law of the Land (Fan Creations)

by General Vagueness , The Vault of Sass, Friday, December 06, 2013, 21:30 (3795 days ago) @ MrPadraig08

9.9/10
I like it a lot, but I would change the last line slightly

Judge those who have wronged our kind, for in your hand you hold the Law.

(plus some spelling issues but whatever) and this was almost calling out for "destiny" to be used (Deliver the Wrongdoers unto their Destiny or something) but it's nowhere to be seen.

-multiple ammo types: incendiary, armor piercing, shock

I'm curious what "shock" ammo does.