Very Excellent
It had the feel of the beginnings of an RPG mission, but worked excellently as a short story. The nods to the world of Destiny were like delicious icing on the cake. Awesome job!
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- NEW FAN FICTION. - 
Kiefer I., 
2013-03-29, 15:51 
- NEW FAN FICTION. - 
TTL Demag0gue, 
2013-03-29, 17:59
- Ditto - Beorn, 2013-03-29, 22:26
 
 - Very Excellent - Mr Daax, 2013-03-29, 18:57
 
 - NEW FAN FICTION. - 
TTL Demag0gue, 
2013-03-29, 17:59