Heroes of Light (Destiny)

by Dame117 , Missouri, Saturday, May 05, 2018, 19:30 (2471 days ago) @ Ragashingo

Children stare in awe
As Guardians line the wall
The city lives again

(Uh, that's one too many syllables there, bub.)

Aaargh! How did I miss that!?

I had typed a draft and put an "*" next to lines that I needed to revise / reword,
looks like I forgot to fix that one.

If you had commented a couple weeks ago, I could have had time to fix it!
Completely my fault though. oh well.

I joined in for the fun of it and community spirit, not to win a prize.
I had figured I disqualified myself anyway by adding the "A hero sleeps tonight" closing line.
But I didn't care because it just felt right to add it.

The OCD part of me though, is upset that I got an extra syllable in that other line