
Example (Destiny)
The phrase "show, don't tell" is a common adage among writers. It's not the difference between visual versus textual media. Rather, it basically boils down to the idea that the author needs to detail the action of the scene, rather than always resorting to an information dump.
Here is a great example from the Last of Us. Spoilers:
You can come across posters for a teen werewolf movie, that's a parody of the twilight films. If you look at it, Ellie asks about the film, and Joel tells her a bit about it. Ellie wonders why Joel would go see such a silly film, and asks who dragged him to see it. Joel says "Nobody".
It's the way he says it, you KNOW his daughter dragged him to see it, and he's dodging that because he isn't over her death. I got that right away, but if you look closely in the beginning of the game, she has that same poster in her room.
Instantly you know Joel is still feeling guilt over his daughter, without any of that being told to you. That's showing.
Complete thread:
- Terminals Work, Grimoires Don't -
Jillybean,
2014-09-14, 14:32
- Terminals Work, Grimoires Don't - Cody Miller, 2014-09-14, 14:35
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Blue_Blazer_NZ,
2014-09-14, 15:06
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 15:21
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Jillybean,
2014-09-14, 15:26
- Halo 4 felt similar -
Jordan117,
2014-09-14, 21:18
- Halo 4 felt similar - Hyokin, 2014-09-15, 10:49
- Halo 4 felt similar -
Jordan117,
2014-09-14, 21:18
- I Never Did the Terminals - Blue_Blazer_NZ, 2014-09-14, 15:28
- I Never Did the Terminals -
TTL Demag0gue,
2014-09-14, 16:02
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 16:12
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Monochron,
2014-09-14, 16:16
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 16:40
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Jillybean,
2014-09-14, 19:26
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 20:06
- I Never Did the Terminals - car15, 2014-09-14, 20:11
- I Never Did the Terminals - Jillybean, 2014-09-15, 11:34
- I Never Did the Terminals - CaneCutter, 2014-09-15, 14:36
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 20:06
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Jillybean,
2014-09-14, 19:26
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 16:40
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Monochron,
2014-09-14, 16:16
- Example -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 18:05
- Example - Kermit, 2014-09-14, 18:10
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 16:12
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Jillybean,
2014-09-14, 15:26
- I Never Did the Terminals -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 15:21
- TL;DR -
INSANEdrive,
2014-09-14, 15:31
- TL;DR - Psyrixx, 2014-09-14, 15:34
- TL;DR -
Jillybean,
2014-09-14, 15:38
- TL;DR v2 -
INSANEdrive,
2014-09-14, 16:09
- Hey, Insane. -
Joe Duplessie (SNIPE 316),
2014-09-14, 20:11
- Hey, Insane. -
INSANEdrive,
2014-09-14, 20:15
- Hey, Insane. - Jillybean, 2014-09-15, 11:36
- Hey, Insane. -
INSANEdrive,
2014-09-14, 20:15
- Hey, Insane. -
Joe Duplessie (SNIPE 316),
2014-09-14, 20:11
- TL;DR v2 -
INSANEdrive,
2014-09-14, 16:09
- TL;DR -
Monochron,
2014-09-14, 16:03
- TL;DR - INSANEdrive, 2014-09-14, 16:11
- TL;DR -
Avateur,
2014-09-14, 16:14
- TL;DR -
Monochron,
2014-09-14, 16:18
- TL;DR -
Avateur,
2014-09-14, 16:21
- TL;DR - Monochron, 2014-09-14, 16:30
- Staten Perhaps? -
Fuertisimo,
2014-09-14, 16:39
- Staten Perhaps? - car15, 2014-09-14, 17:46
- TL;DR - INSANEdrive, 2014-09-14, 16:29
- TL;DR -
Avateur,
2014-09-14, 16:21
- TL;DR - Kermit, 2014-09-14, 16:31
- TL;DR -
Monochron,
2014-09-14, 16:18
- TL;DR - uberfoop, 2014-09-14, 16:16
- Terminals Work, Grimoires Don't - Fuertisimo, 2014-09-14, 16:40
- Skyrim -
minasodaboy,
2014-09-14, 17:34
- Even a la The Last of Us -
Blue_Blazer_NZ,
2014-09-14, 18:03
- This! -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 18:10
- This! -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 18:19
- This! - Cody Miller, 2014-09-14, 18:22
- Yep, exactly. -
Blue_Blazer_NZ,
2014-09-14, 18:24
- Yep, exactly. -
General Battuta,
2014-09-14, 18:40
- Yep, exactly. -
car15,
2014-09-14, 18:56
- Yep, exactly. -
Monochron,
2014-09-14, 19:02
- Yep, exactly. - car15, 2014-09-14, 19:09
- Yep, exactly. -
Monochron,
2014-09-14, 19:02
- Yep, exactly. - Jillybean, 2014-09-14, 19:06
- Yep, exactly. -
Blue_Blazer_NZ,
2014-09-14, 19:18
- Yep, exactly. -
car15,
2014-09-14, 20:14
- Halo 2 redux? - Kermit, 2014-09-14, 20:31
- Yep, exactly. -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 20:31
- Yep, exactly. - car15, 2014-09-14, 21:08
- Yep, exactly. -
car15,
2014-09-14, 20:14
- Yep, exactly. - Fuertisimo, 2014-09-14, 19:21
- Yep, exactly. -
car15,
2014-09-14, 18:56
- Yep, exactly. -
General Battuta,
2014-09-14, 18:40
- This! -
Kermit,
2014-09-14, 18:19
- Fallout 3 (and New Vegas) also did this well. -
Anton P. Nym (aka Steve),
2014-09-15, 08:04
- Fallout 3 (and New Vegas) also did this well. - Jillybean, 2014-09-15, 11:44
- Even a la The Last of Us - CaneCutter, 2014-09-15, 17:24
- This! -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 18:10
- Even a la The Last of Us -
Blue_Blazer_NZ,
2014-09-14, 18:03
- Nobody mentioned the other obvious problem? -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 18:25
- Nobody mentioned the other obvious problem? -
Yapok,
2014-09-14, 18:28
- Nobody mentioned the other obvious problem? -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 18:28
- Nobody mentioned the other obvious problem? - Yapok, 2014-09-14, 19:59
- Nobody mentioned the other obvious problem? -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 18:28
- Orly? - INSANEdrive, 2014-09-14, 18:44
- WTF Is Going On Around Here: #22/500
- griknir, 2014-09-14, 19:20
- Nah, not really a problem given the current implementation -
ZackDark,
2014-09-14, 19:23
- Nah, not really a problem given the current implementation -
Jillybean,
2014-09-14, 19:30
- Oh, library in the Tower is a good one -
ZackDark,
2014-09-14, 21:16
- Oh, library in the Tower is a good one -
Kermit,
2014-09-15, 08:53
- Bungie can have that one for free - Jillybean, 2014-09-15, 11:33
- Oh, library in the Tower is a good one -
Kermit,
2014-09-15, 08:53
- Oh, library in the Tower is a good one -
ZackDark,
2014-09-14, 21:16
- Nah, not really a problem given the current implementation -
Jillybean,
2014-09-14, 19:30
- Nobody mentioned the other obvious problem? -
Yapok,
2014-09-14, 18:28
- It doesn't help that Grimoire is a UI train wreck *LONG* -
Jordan117,
2014-09-14, 20:15
- It doesn't help that Grimoire is a UI train wreck *LONG* - Blue_Blazer_NZ, 2014-09-14, 20:41
- It doesn't help that Grimoire is a UI train wreck *LONG* -
Fuertisimo,
2014-09-14, 21:25
- It doesn't help that Grimoire is a UI train wreck *LONG* -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 21:46
- It doesn't help that Grimoire is a UI train wreck *LONG* - Yapok, 2014-09-14, 22:43
- It doesn't help that Grimoire is a UI train wreck *LONG* -
Cody Miller,
2014-09-14, 21:46