Destiny Awaits Part Three
Fascinating! For the record, it doesn't read slow to me. Dialogue scenes can be every bit as important to the flow of a story as action sequences, and you do a good job here of adding flavor and character to the politics of the City.
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- Destiny Awaits - a Fan Fiction - 
Mix, 
2013-03-29, 23:23 
- Destiny Awaits - a Fan Fiction - 
TTL Demag0gue, 
2013-03-30, 04:15
- Destiny Awaits - a Fan Fiction - Mix, 2013-03-30, 07:43
 
 - Destiny Awaits Part 2 - 
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2013-03-30, 10:59
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2013-03-30, 11:17
- Destiny Awaits Part 2 - Mix, 2013-03-30, 12:02
 
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Claude Errera, 
2013-03-30, 11:31
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2013-03-30, 12:00
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ncsuDuncan, 
2013-03-30, 13:47
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Claude Errera, 
2013-03-30, 14:01
 
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2013-03-30, 12:00
 
 - Destiny Awaits Part 2 - 
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2013-03-30, 11:17
 - Destiny Awaits Part Three - 
Mix, 
2013-04-03, 07:11
- Destiny Awaits Part Three - 
TTL Demag0gue, 
2013-04-03, 09:21
- Destiny Awaits Part Three - 
Mix, 
2013-04-03, 09:49
- Destiny Awaits Part Three - 
TTL Demag0gue, 
2013-04-03, 10:00
- Destiny Awaits Part Three - Mix, 2013-04-03, 10:08
 - My offer - Xenos, 2013-04-03, 17:15
 
 
 - Destiny Awaits Part Three - 
TTL Demag0gue, 
2013-04-03, 10:00
 
 - Destiny Awaits Part Three - 
Mix, 
2013-04-03, 09:49
 
 - Destiny Awaits Part Three - 
TTL Demag0gue, 
2013-04-03, 09:21
 - Destiny Awaits Part Four - Mix, 2013-04-05, 06:30
 - Destiny Awaits -Part 5 - Mix, 2013-04-09, 06:58
 - Destiny Awaits - Part 6 - Mix, 2013-04-15, 19:23
 
 - Destiny Awaits - a Fan Fiction - 
TTL Demag0gue, 
2013-03-30, 04:15