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Story Improvements (SP) (Gaming)

by cheapLEY @, Sunday, May 15, 2016, 01:29 (3118 days ago) @ Cody Miller
edited by cheapLEY, Sunday, May 15, 2016, 01:34

I don't really have anything to add, but I agree on all counts.

Hiding what he was doing from Elena never really made sense to me in the first place, given that he was ostensibly doing it to save his brother's life. He lied just to add that tension to the story, and I don't think it worked that well given the context.

Sam's lie about the break-out and the debt was interesting, if only because I somehow actually didn't see that coming, even though it seems like it should be obvious in retrospect.

Edit: Also, I do think bringing Chloe in the manner you describe would have been absolutely perfect, especially given the note you can find from her in Nathan's attic. Plus, there can never be enough Claudia Black.


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