Grimoire depth (Destiny)

by General Vagueness , The Vault of Sass, Sunday, November 16, 2014, 22:23 (3900 days ago) @ Ragashingo

Yes, there's a few neat story threads running throughout the Grimoire, but formatting man, formatting! Break up your thoughts into shorter, more readable paragraphs. Use a bit of bold to label sections. Use the return key to create a bit of separation between thoughts. Nobody is going to want to spend more than five seconds on one of your posts if you write them like that...

I broke up the paragraphs into, well, paragraphs, and I added line breaks into the list of connections. The longest run between line breaks is 7, is that too long? Were you talking about empty lines?