Grimoire depth (Destiny)

by Kermit , Raleigh, NC, Sunday, November 16, 2014, 22:39 (3900 days ago) @ General Vagueness

Yes, there's a few neat story threads running throughout the Grimoire, but formatting man, formatting! Break up your thoughts into shorter, more readable paragraphs. Use a bit of bold to label sections. Use the return key to create a bit of separation between thoughts. Nobody is going to want to spend more than five seconds on one of your posts if you write them like that...

I broke up the paragraphs into, well, paragraphs, and I added line breaks into the list of connections. The longest run between line breaks is 7, is that too long? Were you talking about empty lines?

Um, why not use a list for a list? Not everyone is used to your brain dumps, GV, and a little more organization and whitespace might help make them be more readable.

Yes, the Grimoire cards are amazing, and your post is a testament to that. Like many other aspects of Destiny, Bungie seems to have hidden its light under a bushel.