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Glad you guys liked it, sorry for all the typos. (Destiny)

by Leviathan, The Woods, Tuesday, March 10, 2015, 02:08 (2414 days ago) @ Leviathan

Most, if not all, should be fixed now. I cleared up some wonky sentences and added a few bits, too. This started as a word document and then 'grew in the telling', which apparently included some growing pains. I had to run out of the house right after the last post without re-reading it all again, so that didn't help either.

The most significant note I added was to this piece:

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There's a rover-like vehicle in the lower left that I hadn't noticed before.


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