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Narrative (no spoilers) (Destiny)

by car15, Wednesday, September 10, 2014, 11:03 (3734 days ago) @ Monochron

Destiny violates the "show, don't tell" rule of storytelling. The Speaker goes on and on about how dire circumstances are and how important it is to protect the Light, but we never really understand why it's such a big deal because we don't see why. The Hive are performing a ritual and it's bad news for the Light... but why, exactly? We never find out.

I understand that this is a 10 year story and the first chapter of a larger tale, and I don't expect all of the answers right now, but we need some sense of danger or else it's just another weekend time-waster.


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