Loved it. I have one critique. (Destiny)
by Cody Miller 
, Music of the Spheres - Never Forgot, Thursday, April 26, 2018, 10:37 (2347 days ago) @ Ragashingo
Yeah. I like that better. But... maybe sometimes even that change would make it too subtle for some?
Nah, he's right. The ID badge tells us she investigated her past. Use it as counterpoint to the first line of narration. The second line is redundant. Audiences are actually smarter than they are often given credit for.
It's one of those things where I am sure the line made sense on the page, but when put to the screen it's no longer necessary.
P.S. If you liked the Halo 4 ending recut, ask me about my Blade Runner 2049 recut!
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- Destiny 2 Exp II Prologue -
Kermit,
2018-04-24, 13:30
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- A pet peeve of mine -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-24, 19:30
- ^ This -
narcogen,
2018-04-25, 06:19
- Relevent Observation. - INSANEdrive, 2018-04-27, 19:59
- A pet peeve of mine -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-25, 07:05
- A pet peeve of mine -
Cody Miller,
2018-04-25, 07:51
- A pet peeve of mine -
MacAddictXIV,
2018-04-25, 08:05
- A pet peeve of mine -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-25, 09:09
- A pet peeve of mine -
MacAddictXIV,
2018-04-25, 10:16
- A pet peeve of mine -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 12:06
- OMG! WHY IS IT SO GOOD! 10 years later and it's still gold.
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INSANEdrive,
2018-04-25, 12:23
- OMG! WHY IS IT SO GOOD! 10 years later and it's still gold. - ManKitten, 2018-04-25, 12:55
- hilariously -
kidtsunami,
2018-04-25, 13:05
- hilariously -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 13:21
- hilariously - Cody Miller, 2018-04-25, 15:47
- hilariously -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 13:21
- OMG! WHY IS IT SO GOOD! 10 years later and it's still gold.
- A pet peeve of mine -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 12:06
- A pet peeve of mine -
MacAddictXIV,
2018-04-25, 10:16
- A pet peeve of mine -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-25, 09:09
- A pet peeve of mine -
MacAddictXIV,
2018-04-25, 08:05
- A pet peeve of mine -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-25, 09:01
- A pet peeve of mine -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-25, 11:46
- A pet peeve of mine - cheapLEY, 2018-04-25, 12:09
- A pet peeve of mine - Cody Miller, 2018-04-25, 13:19
- A pet peeve of mine -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-25, 11:46
- A pet peeve of mine -
Cody Miller,
2018-04-25, 07:51
- A pet peeve of mine -
Cody Miller,
2018-04-25, 10:24
- A pet peeve of mine -
Kermit,
2018-04-25, 11:47
- A pet peeve of mine -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 12:12
- A pet peeve of mine -
Kermit,
2018-04-25, 12:14
- A pet peeve of mine -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-25, 13:04
- A pet peeve of mine -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 13:31
- A pet peeve of mine - Korny, 2018-04-25, 13:38
- A pet peeve of mine -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 13:31
- A pet peeve of mine -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-25, 13:04
- A pet peeve of mine -
Kermit,
2018-04-25, 12:14
- A pet peeve of mine -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 12:12
- A pet peeve of mine -
Kermit,
2018-04-25, 11:47
- A pet peeve of mine -
BlackstarBSP,
2018-04-26, 14:12
- A pet peeve of mine - ZackDark, 2018-04-26, 14:39
- A pet peeve of mine -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-26, 15:10
- Yeah, she stays at the top -
kidtsunami,
2018-04-26, 18:17
- Sure, but she's got to come down at some point. -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-26, 18:33
- inb4 she's still there in-game -
ZackDark,
2018-04-26, 18:37
- inb4 she's still there in-game -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-26, 18:50
- If that is the case I will pre order everything. -
Funkmon,
2018-04-26, 20:20
- Like you ate that sock or actually do it? -
ZackDark,
2018-04-27, 10:51
- Like you ate that sock or actually do it?
- I'd probably choke from laughing so hard -
kidtsunami,
2018-04-26, 20:49
- If that is the case I will pre order everything.
- inb4 she's still there in-game -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-26, 18:50
- inb4 she's still there in-game -
ZackDark,
2018-04-26, 18:37
- Sure, but she's got to come down at some point.
- Yeah, she stays at the top
- ^ This -
narcogen,
2018-04-25, 06:19
- Destiny 2 Exp II Prologue -
Claude Errera,
2018-04-24, 20:55
- Destiny 2 Exp II Prologue - Kermit, 2018-04-25, 03:21
- Hey, that was a pretty cool video. -
ManKitten,
2018-04-25, 12:12
- yep -
Kermit,
2018-04-25, 12:15
- Hey, that was a pretty cool video. -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-25, 12:27
- Hey, that was a pretty cool video. -
Korny,
2018-04-25, 12:53
- +1 -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-25, 13:15
- +1 -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-25, 13:23
- +1 -
Cody Miller,
2018-04-25, 13:27
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Claude Errera,
2018-04-25, 13:43
- Logging out for a bit. -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-25, 14:28
- Logging out for a bit. -
Xenos,
2018-04-25, 14:33
- Logging out for a bit. -
Kermit,
2018-04-25, 15:08
- Logging out for a bit. -
Cody Miller,
2018-04-25, 15:38
- My post wasn't about criticism. -
Kermit,
2018-04-26, 02:12
- My post wasn't about criticism.
- Logging out for a bit. -
Cody Miller,
2018-04-25, 15:38
- Logging out for a bit. -
Kermit,
2018-04-25, 15:08
- It's DMFanella all over again! -
Korny,
2018-04-25, 15:17
- It's DMFanella all over again! -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 16:10
- It's DMFanella all over again! -
Korny,
2018-04-25, 16:24
- It's DMFanella all over again! - Kermit, 2018-04-26, 02:16
- It's DMFanella all over again! -
Korny,
2018-04-25, 16:24
- It's DMFanella all over again! -
cheapLEY,
2018-04-25, 16:10
- Logging out for a bit. - Ragashingo, 2018-04-25, 17:19
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Xenos,
2018-04-25, 14:33
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CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-25, 14:28
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Claude Errera,
2018-04-25, 13:43
- +1 - CruelLEGACEY, 2018-04-25, 13:39
- +1 -
Cody Miller,
2018-04-25, 13:27
- +1 -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-25, 13:23
- Hey, that was a pretty cool video. - Ragashingo, 2018-05-08, 23:57
- +1
- I hope! - MacAddictXIV, 2018-04-25, 13:54
- Hey, that was a pretty cool video. -
Xenos,
2018-04-25, 13:56
- Hey, that was a pretty cool video. - MacAddictXIV, 2018-04-25, 14:00
- 50 Shades of Red - Cody Miller, 2018-04-25, 19:10
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ManKitten,
2018-04-26, 07:13
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Kermit,
2018-04-26, 07:56
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cheapLEY,
2018-04-26, 08:23
- Paging Dr. Bray - Cody Miller, 2018-04-26, 08:45
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cheapLEY,
2018-04-26, 08:23
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Ragashingo,
2018-04-26, 09:15
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ManKitten,
2018-04-26, 09:28
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Ragashingo,
2018-04-26, 09:44
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ManKitten,
2018-04-26, 10:05
- Paging Dr. Bray - Ragashingo, 2018-04-26, 10:16
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ManKitten,
2018-04-26, 10:05
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Ragashingo,
2018-04-26, 09:44
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ManKitten,
2018-04-26, 09:28
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Kermit,
2018-04-26, 07:56
- Hey, that was a pretty cool video. -
Korny,
2018-04-25, 12:53
- Hey, that was a pretty cool video. - CruelLEGACEY, 2018-04-25, 12:40
- Yep, I enjoyed it too -
Xenos,
2018-04-25, 13:25
- yep
- Loved it. I have one critique. -
Robot Chickens,
2018-04-26, 09:32
- Loved it. I have one critique. -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-26, 09:46
- Loved it. I have one critique. - Robot Chickens, 2018-04-26, 09:53
- Loved it. I have one critique. -
Cody Miller,
2018-04-26, 10:37
- Loved it. I have one critique. - ZackDark, 2018-04-26, 10:52
- I'd love to see it if you're inclined to share. -
slycrel,
2018-04-28, 15:50
- Email me for it. -
Cody Miller,
2018-05-02, 19:09
- Email me for it.
- Loved it. I have one critique. - Kermit, 2018-04-26, 15:19
- Loved it. I have one critique. - EffortlessFury, 2018-05-02, 01:16
- Loved it. I have one critique. -
Ragashingo,
2018-04-26, 09:46
- A pet peeve of mine -
CruelLEGACEY,
2018-04-24, 19:30