The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku.

by Pfhrogblast, Finland, Thursday, March 14, 2013, 06:49 (4271 days ago) @ ncsuDuncan

A great shining globe,
carcass of a visitor.
Where do you come from?

Monuments of old
conceal forgotten treasure.
We are to find it.

Vast empire of Sun
and its wandering children.
Ours to make our own.

Circling a giant,
a derelict chariot.
What could lay in wait?

Red earth beneath me.
Weapon in my loving grip.
War never changes.

They lay in the stars,
somewhere up in the heavens.
And they are waiting.

In my small tin can,
Bottomless black around me,
I wait Destiny.

I feel like a total emo.

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The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - ncsuDuncan, 2013-03-13, 20:53
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - ZackDark, 2013-03-13, 21:19
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - ncsuDuncan, 2013-03-13, 21:28
    - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - ZackDark, 2013-03-13, 21:41
      - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - TTL Demag0gue, 2013-03-14, 05:47
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Dagoonite, 2013-03-13, 23:08
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - bluerunner, 2013-03-13, 21:37
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - bluerunner, 2013-03-14, 07:35
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Kermit, 2013-03-14, 07:38
- How does a haiku / oh ncsuDuncan / go with Destiny? - Dean Hofmeyer (unhh), 2013-03-13, 21:46
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Ragashingo, 2013-03-13, 22:09
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Ragashingo, 2013-03-14, 00:29
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Ragashingo, 2013-03-14, 11:40
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Ragashingo, 2013-03-14, 19:50
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Ragashingo, 2013-03-14, 23:56
    - #4 should be our mission statement. - Claude Errera, 2013-03-15, 05:44
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Ragashingo, 2013-03-16, 00:02
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Ragashingo, 2013-03-16, 16:49
- The Guardians - Xenos, 2013-03-13, 22:29
  - Traveler - Xenos, 2013-03-14, 18:33
    - Bungie - Xenos, 2013-03-14, 21:13
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Dagoonite, 2013-03-13, 22:44
  - I think I'm improving with this one! - Dagoonite, 2013-03-16, 01:48
- Wow. - NsU Soldier, 2013-03-13, 23:06
  - Wow. - GauntMkII, 2013-03-14, 04:41
    - On Jams... - NsU Soldier, 2013-03-17, 05:01
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Chewbaccawakka, 2013-03-13, 23:28
- An ode to autumn - Flynn J Taggart, 2013-03-13, 23:46
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - zumphry, 2013-03-13, 23:56
  - For A Few Haikus More - zumphry, 2013-03-14, 01:00
    - I like #2 - Jillybean, 2013-03-14, 14:32
      - I like #2 - zumphry, 2013-03-14, 16:26
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Mr Daax, 2013-03-14, 00:02
  - More entries - Mr Daax, 2013-03-14, 19:47
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - JDQuackers, 2013-03-14, 04:12
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - irishfreak, 2013-03-14, 04:17
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - GauntMkII, 2013-03-14, 04:42
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - TTL Demag0gue, 2013-03-14, 05:45
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - thebruce, 2013-03-14, 06:26
  - #1 deserves a round of applause - Jillybean, 2013-03-14, 14:32
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Pfhrogblast, 2013-03-14, 06:49
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - geophf, 2013-03-14, 07:52
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - InsanityPepper, 2013-03-14, 08:17
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - petetheduck, 2013-03-14, 08:18
- To Cody with love - Kermit, 2013-03-14, 08:23
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Anton P. Nym (aka Steve), 2013-03-14, 08:25
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Mid7night, 2013-03-14, 09:13
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - CaneCutter, 2013-03-14, 09:31
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Schooly D, 2013-03-14, 09:36
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Reaper777, 2013-03-14, 10:18
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - RC, 2013-03-14, 10:33
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - EffortlessFury, 2013-03-14, 10:34
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - pittofdoom, 2013-03-14, 10:49
- participation point, please - pooberry, 2013-03-14, 10:51
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - WestCoastRonin, 2013-03-14, 11:03
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Vitka Kowalewski, 2013-03-14, 11:04
- Above all, be brave. - Cold, 2013-03-14, 11:30
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - MrPadraig08, 2013-03-14, 11:51
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Jillybean, 2013-03-14, 14:51
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Wakko45, 2013-03-14, 12:27
- Another! - EffortlessFury, 2013-03-14, 13:00
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - INSANEdrive, 2013-03-14, 13:09
  - (1)...More - INSANEdrive, 2013-03-15, 08:25
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Harmanimus, 2013-03-14, 13:12
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Dean Hofmeyer (unhh), 2013-03-14, 13:49
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Jillybean, 2013-03-14, 14:49
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Kermit, 2013-03-14, 15:44
    - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Jillybean, 2013-03-14, 15:51
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - rliebherr, 2013-03-14, 15:23
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - ragnarok174, 2013-03-14, 15:35
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Free at Last, 2013-03-14, 16:30
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - ManKitten, 2013-03-14, 16:46
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Arithmomaniac, 2013-03-14, 17:42
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Dean Hofmeyer (unhh), 2013-03-14, 18:00
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Kermit, 2013-03-15, 04:55
- Longing - Kermit, 2013-03-14, 18:24
  - Longing - Stephen Laughlin, 2013-03-14, 21:07
    - Thanks! - Kermit, 2013-03-15, 04:46
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Mercury, 2013-03-14, 19:17
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Cold, 2013-03-14, 19:28
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Mr Daax, 2013-03-14, 19:40
  - Doesn't the crumbly part contain egg? - ZackDark, 2013-03-14, 19:41
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Mercury, 2013-03-14, 20:10
    - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Cold, 2013-03-15, 09:29
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Avateur, 2013-03-14, 22:42
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Grizzlei, 2013-03-14, 23:31
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - RC, 2013-03-15, 05:25
    - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Kermit, 2013-03-15, 05:57
  - YOU SUCK! - Grizzlei, 2014-06-04, 18:35
    - -what. - ZackDark, 2014-06-05, 17:31
- Darkest night - Flynn J Taggart, 2013-03-15, 04:45
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - corporatekiller, 2013-03-15, 07:08
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Mr Daax, 2013-03-15, 07:13
- And so... - Malagate, 2013-03-15, 07:53
- Here goes. (Also a syllable counter if anyone needs it) - Revenant1988, 2013-03-15, 09:01
  - Here goes. (Also a syllable counter if anyone needs it) - Grizzlei, 2013-03-15, 13:55
    - Here goes. (Also a syllable counter if anyone needs it) - ZackDark, 2013-03-15, 15:00
      - Here goes. (Also a syllable counter if anyone needs it) - Grizzlei, 2013-03-15, 15:24
        
        Here goes. (Also a syllable counter if anyone needs it) - Cold, 2013-03-15, 22:57
        
        Here goes. (Also a syllable counter if anyone needs it) - Ragashingo, 2013-03-16, 00:11
        
        You are way too good at this - Grizzlei, 2013-03-16, 00:55
- Screw traditional Haiku form! - Bones, 2013-03-15, 12:14
- Haiku? - thebruce, 2013-03-15, 14:24
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Cody Miller, 2013-03-16, 03:12
  - lol - Mr Daax, 2013-03-16, 05:32
    - lol - Flynn J Taggart, 2013-03-16, 13:37
  - Dammit, I lol'd - MrPadraig08, 2013-03-17, 20:59
    - Dammit, I lol'd - Ragashingo, 2013-03-17, 21:29
      - Dammit, I lol'd - JDQuackers, 2013-03-18, 04:30
      - Dammit, I lol'd - RC, 2013-03-18, 07:18
        
        Dammit, I lol'd - Ragashingo, 2013-03-18, 07:34
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - EMJAYEL, 2013-03-16, 12:44
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Kalamari, 2013-03-17, 08:20
  - The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Grizzlei, 2013-03-17, 09:15
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Mr Daax, 2013-03-17, 09:51
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - General Vagueness, 2013-03-17, 21:06
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - Stephen Laughlin, 2013-03-18, 22:15
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - rowboat, 2013-03-19, 08:32
- The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku. - kapowaz, 2013-03-19, 09:11
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