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The DBO Challenge - Week 1: Write a haiku.

by Mid7night ⌂ @, Rocket BSCHSHCSHSHCCHGGH!!!!!!, Thursday, March 14, 2013, 09:13 (2708 days ago) @ ncsuDuncan

In this brave new world

Who will be our Destiny?

Guardians Wanted
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Traveller, thankful

Weariness hangs over all

Why did you save us?
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Guardianis fortis

Per audacia ad astra

Eventum latet


(I know you might think the second line has 8 syllables, but near as I can figure, in latin, "audacia" is actually pronounced "oww-da-chya", not "oww-da-see-ah".)

It also kinda works in english:


Guardians strong with

Audacity to the stars

The outcome hidden

Actually, THIS was the first one I wrote...then I realized I wasn't on HBO anymore and "relevant to this community" has a whole new meaning here... XD

For a brick flew he

"Pretty good" was the high praise

No craters in space


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