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Nope. "To War" from the same game (Destiny)

by Kermit @, Raleigh, NC, Wednesday, April 06, 2022, 12:41 (713 days ago) @ CyberKN
edited by Kermit, Wednesday, April 06, 2022, 13:03

The question remains for me, in both instances, what is "it"?

In English composition class, we'd call this an example of an unclear referent.

The problem isn't with the line, but with what precedes the line. The line isn't set up properly either time.

If you tell me what "it" refers to, I'll write a better line to precede it.


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