Nope. "To War" from the same game (Destiny)
by Kermit 
, Raleigh, NC, Wednesday, April 06, 2022, 12:41 (963 days ago) @ CyberKN
edited by Kermit, Wednesday, April 06, 2022, 13:03
The question remains for me, in both instances, what is "it"?
In English composition class, we'd call this an example of an unclear referent.
The problem isn't with the line, but with what precedes the line. The line isn't set up properly either time.
If you tell me what "it" refers to, I'll write a better line to precede it.
Complete thread:
- TWAB - 31st of March, 2022 | VOTE! Mechs vs Monsters. -
INSANEdrive,
2022-03-31, 12:54
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- MECHS! - cheapLEY, 2022-03-31, 14:18
- Monster look SO much better than last time -
ZackDark,
2022-03-31, 15:59
- But still not good enough
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Vortech,
2022-04-03, 12:10
- But still not good enough
- MONSTER! -
INSANEdrive,
2022-03-31, 17:35
- That's a very good point -
ZackDark,
2022-04-01, 04:57
- It's a reason to abstain at most -
Vortech,
2022-04-03, 12:11
- It's a reason to abstain at most - ZackDark, 2022-04-03, 12:50
- It's a reason to abstain at most -
Vortech,
2022-04-03, 12:11
- That's a very good point -
ZackDark,
2022-04-01, 04:57
- VOTE! Mechs vs Monsters. : Yes, give me both. -
CougRon,
2022-04-01, 10:55
- "She'd Said That To Me Once...About Being a Machine." -
Morpheus,
2022-04-03, 13:16
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 11:33
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-05, 11:59
- +1 -
CyberKN,
2022-04-05, 12:18
- +1 -
kidtsunami,
2022-04-05, 12:22
- +1 -
INSANEdrive,
2022-04-05, 13:12
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 14:46
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-05, 15:06
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 17:23
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Claude Errera,
2022-04-05, 17:31
- Nope. "To War" from the same game - Kermit, 2022-04-05, 17:38
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
CyberKN,
2022-04-05, 18:47
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-06, 12:41
- Death. -
INSANEdrive,
2022-04-06, 13:32
- Nope. "To War" from the same game - squidnh3, 2022-04-06, 13:34
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
CyberKN,
2022-04-06, 13:41
- Rewrites - Kermit, 2022-04-08, 09:48
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
uberfoop,
2022-04-09, 01:41
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 05:52
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
ZackDark,
2022-04-11, 08:40
- You can't write a better line to precede it... - Kermit, 2022-04-11, 11:33
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-11, 10:47
- You can't write a better line to precede it... - Kermit, 2022-04-11, 11:37
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
uberfoop,
2022-04-11, 11:03
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 11:58
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
uberfoop,
2022-04-11, 12:24
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 16:36
- 2¢ -
INSANEdrive,
2022-04-11, 19:47
- You and uberfoop have defeated me. - Kermit, 2022-04-12, 14:12
- wtf am I reading? -
Schooly D,
2022-05-03, 21:09
- LOL! -
Kermit,
2022-05-04, 07:58
- wtf is asking? -
INSANEdrive,
2022-05-04, 18:11
- LOL!
- I feel you, but I still love both deliveries of the line -
kidtsunami,
2022-04-12, 19:35
- 2¢ -
INSANEdrive,
2022-04-11, 19:47
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 16:36
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
uberfoop,
2022-04-11, 12:24
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 11:58
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
ZackDark,
2022-04-11, 08:40
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 05:52
- Death.
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-06, 12:41
- Exactly -
kidtsunami,
2022-04-06, 06:49
- Keith's Voice Is Just Heaven... -
Morpheus,
2022-04-30, 17:59
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Claude Errera,
2022-04-05, 17:31
- Nope. "To War" from the same game - Cody Miller, 2022-04-13, 09:34
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 17:23
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-05, 15:06
- +1
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Cody Miller,
2022-04-05, 12:20
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" - Kermit, 2022-04-05, 14:27
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" - Robot Chickens, 2022-04-05, 15:37
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" - cheapLEY, 2022-04-05, 20:46
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
EffortlessFury,
2022-04-05, 14:21
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 14:54
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
EffortlessFury,
2022-04-07, 23:00
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Cody Miller,
2022-04-08, 09:55
- Yep. - Kermit, 2022-04-08, 11:02
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" - Kermit, 2022-04-08, 11:00
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Cody Miller,
2022-04-08, 09:55
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
EffortlessFury,
2022-04-07, 23:00
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Hasan3434,
2022-04-25, 12:21
- Sure thing! Bot of Definitely Spam. -
INSANEdrive,
2022-04-25, 14:21
- Sure thing! Bot of Definitely Spam.
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 14:54
- Nope. "To War" from the same game
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 11:33
- TWAB - 31st of March, 2022 | VOTE! Mechs vs Monsters. -
Hasan3434,
2022-04-25, 06:36
- Sure thing! Bot of Probably Spam. -
INSANEdrive,
2022-04-25, 11:13
- Sure thing! Bot of Probably Spam.