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Rewrites (Destiny)

by Kermit @, Raleigh, NC, Friday, April 08, 2022, 09:48 (47 days ago) @ CyberKN

Okay, this is good.

I know anyone who cares about this and is still reading has the lines ingrained as they are and will naturally resist any change, but hear me out--I believe these are better set ups.

Scene 1

Johnson: Come on, now. For our sake, you two need to quit this habit of trying to kill each other.

Arbiter: Were it so easy.

Scene 2

Hood: I accept that he's gone, but ...

Arbiter: Were it so easy.


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