You can't write a better line to precede it... (Destiny)
...because there isn't a line preceding it. Arby is responding to the Chief having charged forth and stuck a pistol into his mouth. He gave himself up to avoid escalating the moment, and the "it" is the Chief getting the better of him.
Arby is not primarily making a response to Johnson. The camera even cuts Johnson out of the frame with the appropriate timing to make it look like Arby is slamming the line straight at the Chief's face. There's some ambiguous potential for secondary meaning with respect to Johnson's line, but it's not where the main energy of the scene is going.
This is the best, most compelling interpretation of the line I've ever read. Too bad it's fan fiction, because there is a line preceding it, and that is part of the context in which the line is delivered, and the poor set up detracts from your thesis.A second attempt at a rewrite that serves your narrative.
Johnson: Come on, Chief. For our sake, don't kill an ally.
Arbiter: Were it so easy.
I just watched the scene again to make sure my mind wasn't playing tricks on me. I see what you are saying in that Johnson's line immediately precedes it. On the other hand, it feels like he's a spectator in the drama happening with Arby and the Chief. While Johnson's line is there, the Arbiter is responding to the Chief's actions. I've always interpreted it this way so I don't think it's a super niche way of reading the scene.
Complete thread:
- TWAB - 31st of March, 2022 | VOTE! Mechs vs Monsters. -
INSANEdrive,
2022-03-31, 12:54
- MECHS! - cheapLEY, 2022-03-31, 14:18
- Monster look SO much better than last time -
ZackDark,
2022-03-31, 15:59
- But still not good enough - Vortech, 2022-04-03, 12:10
- MONSTER! -
INSANEdrive,
2022-03-31, 17:35
- That's a very good point -
ZackDark,
2022-04-01, 04:57
- It's a reason to abstain at most -
Vortech,
2022-04-03, 12:11
- It's a reason to abstain at most - ZackDark, 2022-04-03, 12:50
- It's a reason to abstain at most -
Vortech,
2022-04-03, 12:11
- That's a very good point -
ZackDark,
2022-04-01, 04:57
- VOTE! Mechs vs Monsters. : Yes, give me both. - CougRon, 2022-04-01, 10:55
- "She'd Said That To Me Once...About Being a Machine." -
Morpheus,
2022-04-03, 13:16
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 11:33
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-05, 11:59
- +1 - CyberKN, 2022-04-05, 12:18
- +1 - kidtsunami, 2022-04-05, 12:22
- +1 - INSANEdrive, 2022-04-05, 13:12
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 14:46
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-05, 15:06
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 17:23
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Claude Errera,
2022-04-05, 17:31
- Nope. "To War" from the same game - Kermit, 2022-04-05, 17:38
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
CyberKN,
2022-04-05, 18:47
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-06, 12:41
- Death. - INSANEdrive, 2022-04-06, 13:32
- Nope. "To War" from the same game - squidnh3, 2022-04-06, 13:34
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
CyberKN,
2022-04-06, 13:41
- Rewrites - Kermit, 2022-04-08, 09:48
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
uberfoop,
2022-04-09, 01:41
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 05:52
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
ZackDark,
2022-04-11, 08:40
- You can't write a better line to precede it... - Kermit, 2022-04-11, 11:33
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-11, 10:47
- You can't write a better line to precede it... - Kermit, 2022-04-11, 11:37
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
uberfoop,
2022-04-11, 11:03
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 11:58
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
uberfoop,
2022-04-11, 12:24
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 16:36
- 2¢ -
INSANEdrive,
2022-04-11, 19:47
- You and uberfoop have defeated me. - Kermit, 2022-04-12, 14:12
- wtf am I reading? -
Schooly D,
2022-05-03, 21:09
- LOL! - Kermit, 2022-05-04, 07:58
- wtf is asking? - INSANEdrive, 2022-05-04, 18:11
- I feel you, but I still love both deliveries of the line - kidtsunami, 2022-04-12, 19:35
- 2¢ -
INSANEdrive,
2022-04-11, 19:47
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 16:36
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
uberfoop,
2022-04-11, 12:24
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 11:58
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
ZackDark,
2022-04-11, 08:40
- You can't write a better line to precede it... -
Kermit,
2022-04-11, 05:52
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-06, 12:41
- Exactly - kidtsunami, 2022-04-06, 06:49
- Keith's Voice Is Just Heaven... - Morpheus, 2022-04-30, 17:59
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Claude Errera,
2022-04-05, 17:31
- Nope. "To War" from the same game - Cody Miller, 2022-04-13, 09:34
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 17:23
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-05, 15:06
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Cody Miller,
2022-04-05, 12:20
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" - Kermit, 2022-04-05, 14:27
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" - Robot Chickens, 2022-04-05, 15:37
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" - cheapLEY, 2022-04-05, 20:46
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
EffortlessFury,
2022-04-05, 14:21
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 14:54
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
EffortlessFury,
2022-04-07, 23:00
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Cody Miller,
2022-04-08, 09:55
- Yep. - Kermit, 2022-04-08, 11:02
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" - Kermit, 2022-04-08, 11:00
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Cody Miller,
2022-04-08, 09:55
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
EffortlessFury,
2022-04-07, 23:00
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Hasan3434,
2022-04-25, 12:21
- Sure thing! Bot of Definitely Spam. - INSANEdrive, 2022-04-25, 14:21
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 14:54
- Nope. "To War" from the same game -
Robot Chickens,
2022-04-05, 11:59
- Worst Halo line since "were it so easy" -
Kermit,
2022-04-05, 11:33
- TWAB - 31st of March, 2022 | VOTE! Mechs vs Monsters. -
Hasan3434,
2022-04-25, 06:36
- Sure thing! Bot of Probably Spam. - INSANEdrive, 2022-04-25, 11:13