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I didn’t hate it… (Fan Creations)

by breitzen @, Kansas, Friday, May 13, 2022, 20:42 (946 days ago) @ Cody Miller

Kai being the character chief gets experimental with would have been way more interesting and believable.


I don't think it would have been either one of those things.

It would not really have done much to complicate the narrative, and Makee is in a similar situation to the Chief. They are 'the same' as she tells him, and in some sense that's very true. The show makes this totally clear (the parallel nudity in Episode 2, the examination of both their scars, both being kidnapped as a child, the questioning of your guardians, etc). I think it makes sense emotionally for them to get together this way. Plus… now Chief trusted a spy which has implications moving forward for narrative.


Not as written. Obviously how it is works better for the show that’s been written. I just don’t think it’s done very well.


Next week's your chance to rewrite! :-p

I'm on it!


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