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Episode 8 (Fan Creations)

by Kermit @, Raleigh, NC, Saturday, May 14, 2022, 17:15 (45 days ago) @ Cody Miller

I mostly agree with this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t_EbMqIsIKc

"The dialogue is very below my age"


Haha.

Underming himself a little, eh? I'm sympathetic with many of his points. The writing can be uneven. Not everything worked for me this episode, but what did work and what was smart was the story of Makee, and her decision to embrace her humanity and then be torn away from that embrace. The postcoital scene and the excruciating fingernail scene were crucial, and what was so great about it, was how we know something about her no one else can know. It's good when we can see the characters acting out of ignorance of the full picture, and the domino effect of all that. Looking forward to the next one!


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