I think the story is rushed (Fan Creations)
I know how to write. The issue with your comparisons is that they all fill different roles for their respective stories -- none are equivalent to the focus that Ellie and Joel's relationship receives, nor the development it's supposed to go through. You say nine episodes is enough, but two of those are entirely devoted to not Joel and Ellie.
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- Early Praise for The Last of Us -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-10, 02:42
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- Side Question / Sub Topic -
ManKitten,
2023-01-10, 05:54
- Side Question / Sub Topic - ZackDark, 2023-01-10, 14:33
- Side Question / Sub Topic - Joe Duplessie (SNIPE 316), 2023-01-11, 05:35
- Side Question / Sub Topic -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-11, 09:57
- Side Question / Sub Topic -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-11, 10:32
- Side Question / Sub Topic - ManKitten, 2023-01-11, 11:02
- Side Question / Sub Topic -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-11, 10:32
- Episode 1 -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-15, 19:55
- Episode 1 - cheapLEY, 2023-01-15, 20:07
- Episode 1 -
Claude Errera,
2023-01-16, 09:17
- Episode 1 -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-16, 10:25
- Episode 1 -
Kermit,
2023-01-16, 18:56
- P.S. -
Kermit,
2023-01-16, 19:31
- P.S. -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-16, 20:53
- P.S. -
Kermit,
2023-01-16, 22:02
- I think they nailed it -
Beorn,
2023-01-18, 22:26
- I think they nailed it -
Kermit,
2023-01-19, 09:21
- I think they nailed it -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-19, 09:31
- I think they nailed it -
Kermit,
2023-01-19, 09:36
- I think they nailed it -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-19, 10:02
- I think they nailed it -
Kermit,
2023-01-19, 10:06
- I think they nailed it - cheapLEY, 2023-01-21, 12:32
- I think they nailed it -
Kermit,
2023-01-19, 10:06
- I think they nailed it -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-19, 10:02
- I think they nailed it - Cody Miller, 2023-01-19, 13:05
- I think they nailed it -
Kermit,
2023-01-19, 09:36
- I think they nailed it -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-19, 09:31
- I think they nailed it -
Kermit,
2023-01-19, 09:21
- I think they nailed it -
Beorn,
2023-01-18, 22:26
- P.S. -
Kermit,
2023-01-16, 22:02
- P.S. -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-16, 20:53
- P.S. -
Kermit,
2023-01-16, 19:31
- Episode 1 -
Kermit,
2023-01-16, 18:56
- Episode 1 -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-16, 10:25
- Joel was never given a redemption -
Anna Komnene,
2023-01-21, 15:43
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
Korny,
2023-01-21, 16:29
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-21, 20:19
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
EffortlessFury,
2023-01-21, 21:38
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-21, 22:04
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
EffortlessFury,
2023-01-23, 11:05
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) - cheapLEY, 2023-01-23, 12:13
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
EffortlessFury,
2023-01-23, 11:05
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-21, 22:04
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
EffortlessFury,
2023-01-21, 21:38
- Wasn't a fan of Part II's story because... -
Anna Komnene,
2023-01-22, 10:46
- Wasn't a fan of Part II's story because... - Cody Miller, 2023-01-22, 11:07
- Wasn't a fan of Part II's story because... - cheapLEY, 2023-01-22, 17:52
- Wasn't a fan of Part II's story because... - EffortlessFury, 2023-01-23, 11:11
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
cheapLEY,
2023-01-21, 20:19
- Joel was never given a redemption - Cody Miller, 2023-01-22, 08:46
- Joel was never given a redemption (*Part II spoilz*) -
Korny,
2023-01-21, 16:29
- Episode 2 -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-22, 22:23
- Dustin Echoes -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-23, 12:47
- Dustin Echoes -
Claude Errera,
2023-01-23, 13:04
- Dustin Echoes - ZackDark, 2023-01-23, 13:27
- Dustin Echoes - cheapLEY, 2023-01-23, 14:14
- Dustin Echoes - Cody Miller, 2023-01-23, 18:00
- Dustin Echoes -
Claude Errera,
2023-01-23, 13:04
- Episode 2 -
Kermit,
2023-01-23, 19:04
- Episode 2 - cheapLEY, 2023-01-23, 19:19
- Dustin Echoes -
Cody Miller,
2023-01-23, 12:47
- Episode 3 - Cody Miller, 2023-01-30, 17:42
- Episode 4 -
Cody Miller,
2023-02-06, 16:30
- Episode 4 - Kermit, 2023-02-06, 17:13
- Episode 4--Wheel Spinning -
cheapLEY,
2023-02-06, 17:35
- Episode 4--Wheel Spinning - Cody Miller, 2023-02-06, 17:40
- Episode 5 - Cody Miller, 2023-02-13, 19:10
- The Ebert Trap - Cody Miller, 2023-02-20, 08:17
- The failure of The Last of Us show. -
cheapLEY,
2023-03-05, 19:39
- The failure of The Last of Us show. -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-05, 22:54
- The failure of The Last of Us show. - Korny, 2023-03-06, 10:35
- The failure of The Last of Us show. -
Kermit,
2023-03-06, 10:23
- I think the story is rushed -
Anna Komnene,
2023-03-06, 14:49
- This - ZackDark, 2023-03-06, 15:32
- I think the story is rushed -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-06, 15:51
- I think the story is rushed -
Anna Komnene,
2023-03-07, 08:11
- I think the story is rushed - cheapLEY, 2023-03-07, 08:30
- I think the story is rushed -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-07, 09:49
- I think the story is rushed -
Kermit,
2023-03-07, 13:32
- I think the story is rushed -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-07, 13:42
- I think the story is rushed -
Kermit,
2023-03-07, 14:15
- I think the story is rushed -
cheapLEY,
2023-03-07, 15:34
- I think the story is rushed - Cody Miller, 2023-03-07, 15:58
- I think the story is rushed -
cheapLEY,
2023-03-07, 15:34
- I think the story is rushed -
Kermit,
2023-03-07, 14:15
- I think the story is rushed -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-07, 13:42
- I think the story is rushed -
Anna Komnene,
2023-03-08, 09:11
- I think the story is rushed - Cody Miller, 2023-03-08, 12:01
- I think the story is rushed -
Kermit,
2023-03-07, 13:32
- I think the story is rushed -
Anna Komnene,
2023-03-07, 08:11
- I think the story is rushed -
Anna Komnene,
2023-03-06, 14:49
- The failure of The Last of Us show. -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-05, 22:54
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-12, 23:32
- The Finale -
Kermit,
2023-03-13, 09:40
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-13, 10:40
- The Finale -
Kermit,
2023-03-13, 11:15
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-13, 11:40
- The Finale - Kermit, 2023-03-13, 11:50
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-13, 11:40
- The Finale -
Kermit,
2023-03-13, 11:15
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-13, 10:40
- The Finale -
Korny,
2023-03-13, 11:29
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-13, 11:36
- The Finale - Kermit, 2023-03-13, 11:54
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-13, 11:36
- The Finale -
cheapLEY,
2023-03-13, 16:38
- The Finale -
Kermit,
2023-03-14, 10:48
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-14, 11:29
- The Finale - Kermit, 2023-03-14, 11:47
- The Finale -
Cody Miller,
2023-03-14, 11:29
- The Finale -
Kermit,
2023-03-14, 10:48
- A general complaint - Kermit, 2023-03-15, 09:24
- The Finale -
Kermit,
2023-03-13, 09:40
- Side Question / Sub Topic -
ManKitten,
2023-01-10, 05:54