I think the story is rushed (Fan Creations)

by Cody Miller @, Music of the Spheres - Never Forgot, Tuesday, March 07, 2023, 15:58 (497 days ago) @ cheapLEY

Logically we can fill in those gaps and assume they had some shit to deal with along the way, but having to assume it isn’t good enough when I’m supposed to believe they’ve been through hell and back together.

You essentially have to imagine a world where the game doesn't exist. The show is now the only instance of this story being told.

Now go and make the show. Assume nothing, and give the audience everything they need right there in the work itself.

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